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IELTS WRITING · Task 1 + Task 2 急救模板

雅思写作 · 急救模板 + 系统速成

题型结构 · Band7 范文拆解 · 图表实验室 · 话题观点 · 改写实验室 · AI 批改闭环。左侧目录可跳转到任一小节。

模板使用原则

核心警告:模板是句子骨架,不是完整段落背诵材料。考官能识别死记硬背。
正确用法
用模板搭建逻辑框架 → 填入题目具体内容 → 用自己的语言表达观点
错误用法
背诵整段模板 → 生硬套用 → 与题目脱节 → TR 失分
实战策略:记住 5–6 个万能连接句,其余内容必须针对题目现场生成。

Task 2 · 观点论证题

题目特征
To what extent do you agree or disagree? / Do you agree or disagree?
四段结构
开头段:改写题目 + 明确立场
主体段 1:理由 A + 解释 + 例子
主体段 2:理由 B + 解释 + 例子
结尾段:重申立场 + 总结要点
开头段公式:
While some people believe [题目观点], I would argue that [你的立场].
This essay will explain why [核心理由概括].
5.5 分示例
题目:Some people think technology makes life more complex. Agree?

I agree with this opinion. Technology is very complex. Many people cannot use computers. Old people do not understand smartphones. Technology makes many problems. For example, my grandmother cannot use WeChat. This is very difficult.
问题:
  • 观点重复,无深度展开
  • 例子过于个人化且不具说服力
  • 句式单一,逻辑连接缺失
7.0 分改写
While technological advances have undoubtedly brought convenience, I believe they have simultaneously increased complexity in daily life. This is primarily because modern devices require constant learning and adaptation, which can be overwhelming for certain demographics. For instance, elderly citizens often struggle with digital banking systems that have replaced traditional face-to-face services, forcing them to either seek assistance or risk exclusion from essential services.
改进点:立场清晰 + 因果逻辑 + 社会层面例证 + 复杂句式
立场变体
完全同意:
I completely agree that...
两个主体段都支持
部分同意:
While I accept that [让步], I believe [主要观点]...
一段让步,一段主张
完全不同意:
I strongly disagree with the view that...
两个主体段都反驳

双边讨论题

题目特征
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
常见错误:只讨论双方观点,忘记给出自己的立场 → TA 扣分
标准结构
开头:改写 + 说明将讨论双方并给出立场
主体 1:一方观点 + 理由
主体 2:另一方观点 + 理由 + 过渡到自己立场
结尾:明确表达个人观点
个人观点植入位置:
方案A:开头段明确立场:"While both views have merit, I believe..."
方案B:主体段2结尾过渡:"However, I find the latter view more convincing because..."
方案C:结尾段首次明确:"Having considered both sides, I am convinced that..."
平衡技巧:即使你倾向一方,也要给另一方至少 3 句话的公正讨论,避免"假讨论"。
主体段过渡句
On the other hand, those who support [另一方] argue that...
Conversely, proponents of [观点] claim that...
However, the opposing view suggests that...

双问题型

题目特征
What are the causes? What solutions can be taken?
What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Why is this the case? Is it positive or negative?
致命错误:只回答一个问题,或两个问题篇幅严重失衡 → TA 直接 6 分以下
强制结构
开头:改写题目 + 说明将回答两个问题
主体 1:完整回答第一个问题(2-3 个要点)
主体 2:完整回答第二个问题(2-3 个要点)
结尾:总结两个问题的核心答案
原因类问题
There are several factors contributing to this trend.
The primary reason is that...
Another significant cause involves...
方案类问题
To address this issue, multiple measures should be implemented.
One effective solution would be to...
Additionally, it is essential that...
篇幅分配:两个主体段字数应大致相等,各 100-120 词。不要一段 150 词,另一段 70 词。

问题解决题

题目特征
What problems does this cause? How can these problems be solved?
弱解决方案 (5.5)
问题:城市交通拥堵

Government should build more roads. People should use public transport. Everyone should drive less. These solutions can solve the traffic problem.
缺陷:
  • 方案笼统,缺乏可行性细节
  • 无实施主体和具体措施
  • 未说明方案如何解决问题
强解决方案 (7.0)
To alleviate urban congestion, local authorities could implement congestion charging schemes similar to London's system, where drivers pay fees to enter city centers during peak hours. This approach not only discourages unnecessary car use but also generates revenue that can be reinvested in public transportation infrastructure, creating a sustainable cycle of improvement.
优势:具体措施 + 实施方式 + 双重效果 + 真实案例参考
解决方案深度公式
提出具体方案:One viable solution is to...
说明实施方式:This could be achieved by...
解释解决机制:By doing so, [问题] would be addressed because...
补充效果:It would also help to... / On top of that, it could...

优劣势分析题

题目措辞差异
类型 A:Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
→ 必须明确表态哪方更重要
类型 B:Discuss advantages and disadvantages.
→ 可以不表态,平衡讨论即可
关键区别:看到 "outweigh" 必须在开头或结尾明确说明 "advantages outweigh" 或 "disadvantages outweigh",否则 TA 失分。
Outweigh 题型立场句
In my opinion, the benefits of [话题] far outweigh the drawbacks.
Despite some obvious advantages, I believe the disadvantages are more significant.
While there are merits on both sides, the positive aspects are considerably more substantial.
论证技巧:即使你认为优势更大,也要先讨论劣势(让步),再用更长篇幅论证优势,形成对比说服力。
对比连接词
However, these disadvantages are outweighed by...
Nevertheless, the advantages are more compelling because...
By contrast, the benefits prove far more substantial when...

Task 1 · 学术图表

Overview 黄金法则
必须单独成段,写在开头段后或结尾段前,包含 2-3 个最显著特征,不含具体数据。
万能开头:Overall, it is clear that...
In general, the data reveals that...
The most striking feature is that...
图表类型Overview 重点主体段组织
折线图整体趋势(上升/下降/波动)· 起点终点对比 · 最高/最低点按线条分组或按时间段分组
柱状图最大/最小类别 · 类别间差距 · 共同模式按类别分组或按数值大小分组
饼图最大/最小份额 · 占比过半的项 · 相似比例的项从大到小描述或分组对比
表格最高/最低数值 · 数值范围 · 变化幅度按行或列分组,避免逐格描述
流程图总步骤数 · 起点和终点 · 循环或分支按阶段分组,用顺序连接词
地图主要变化性质 · 变化区域数量 · 新增/消失项按区域或按变化类型分组
弱 Overview
The graph shows different numbers. Some countries increased and some decreased. There are many changes in the data.
问题:笼统无信息量,未指出具体特征
强 Overview
Overall, while most European countries experienced a decline in birth rates between 1990 and 2020, Asian nations showed a contrasting upward trend, with Japan being the only exception that mirrored the European pattern.
优势:对比清晰 + 指出例外 + 概括主要模式
数据描述变化词
上升:
increase, rise, grow, climb, surge, soar
下降:
decrease, decline, fall, drop, plunge, slump
波动:
fluctuate, vary, oscillate

Task 1 · 书信 (G 类)

信件类型开头称呼结尾语气特征
正式信
投诉/申请/建议给机构
Dear Sir or Madam,Yours faithfully,客观、礼貌、避免缩写
半正式信
给认识但不熟的人
Dear Mr./Ms. [姓],Yours sincerely,友好但保持距离
非正式信
给朋友/家人
Dear [名],Best wishes, / Warm regards,可用缩写、口语化表达
致命错误:题目要求写给 "manager" 却用 "Dear friend" → 直接扣分
三要点检查:题目通常有 3 个 bullet points,每个必须完整回应,各用一段。
首段目的句
正式:I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...
I am writing to apply for the position of...
非正式:I hope this letter finds you well. I'm writing to tell you about...
Just wanted to drop you a line about...
篇幅分配:开头 1-2 句说明写信目的 → 三个主体段各回应一个要点(每段 3-4 句)→ 结尾 1-2 句礼貌收尾

训练单元 · 观点题(Agree/Disagree)

① 题型识别
题干出现 to what extent do you agree or disagree / do you agree or disagree,只给一个观点让你表态。
③ 安全立场
部分同意最稳:大方向选一边,但留一个让步/限定,避免绝对。
⑤ 大纲模板
1引言:改写题目 + 一句话亮明立场 + 预告两个理由
2主体1:理由A → 解释机制 → 具体例子
3主体2:理由B,或先让步再反驳
4结论:重申立场,收束两点
练习题目
University students should be free to choose any subject they like, even if it offers few job prospects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
⑥ Band 7 完整范文(约 267 词)
I largely agree that students should be free to choose their own subject, though I understand why job prospects cannot be ignored entirely. When people study something they genuinely care about, they tend to work harder and go further. A student who loves history, for example, is far more likely to read widely, think critically and eventually find a way to use those skills than someone pushed into a "safe" degree they resent. Forcing everyone towards subjects with obvious job openings also assumes we can predict the job market, which we usually cannot; fields that look secure today can shrink within a decade. We only have to look at how quickly some once-reliable office jobs have been automated to realise how unreliable such predictions can be, and how unfair it is to steer every student towards them. That said, complete freedom without any guidance can be risky. Some students choose a subject with little thought about how they will support themselves afterwards, and then struggle to find any work at all. A sensible middle path is to let students follow their interests while making sure they understand the realistic options each subject leads to, so the choice is free but informed. On balance, I believe the benefits of studying something you care about — motivation, depth and long-term persistence — outweigh the safety of a job-focused degree, provided students go in with their eyes open rather than ignoring reality completely. A subject chosen out of genuine interest, with a clear head about the risks, is almost always worth more than a safe one chosen out of fear.
⑦ 5.5 低分常见写法
I think students should study what they like. Because if they like it, they will study hard. And it is good for their future. But some subjects have no job. So maybe they should think about job too. In conclusion, I firmly believe students should choose freely.
⑧ 低分问题分析
  • 立场靠 firstly/in conclusion 这类套话撑,没有真正展开
  • 例子完全缺席,全是 'like it→study hard→good' 的空链条
  • 句子短而并列,无复杂句,LR/GRA 都低
⑨ 逐段改写示范
低分句:But some subjects have no job. So maybe they should think about job too.
Band 7 改写:That said, complete freedom can be risky: some students give little thought to how they will support themselves, and then struggle to find work at all.
⑩ 学生练习题(原创,各写一篇)
  1. Some people think school children should study a foreign language from a very early age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
  2. Governments should spend money on public services rather than on the arts. Do you agree or disagree?
  3. Working from home is better than working in an office. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

训练单元 · 双边讨论(Discuss both views)

① 题型识别
题干出现 discuss both views and give your own opinion,两种看法并列,且必须给自己立场。
⑤ 大纲模板
1引言:两种看法都存在 + 亮出你更偏哪边
2主体1:一方观点,公正给足理由和例子
3主体2:另一方观点 + 说明你为何更认同它
4结论:承认双方,重申立场
练习题目
Some people believe advertising has a positive effect on society, while others think it is largely harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
⑥ Band 7 完整范文(约 254 词)
People are divided over whether advertising benefits society or harms it. Both sides have a point, but on balance I lean towards the view that its harms now outweigh its benefits. Those who defend advertising argue that it plays a useful role in the economy. It informs people about products they might genuinely need, supports free services such as television and online platforms, and helps new businesses reach customers they could never afford to contact otherwise. Without it, many services we now use for free would have to charge us directly. However, I find the concerns more convincing. Modern advertising does not simply inform; it is designed to create wants that did not exist before, pushing people to buy things they cannot afford and to measure themselves against unrealistic images. Children are especially vulnerable, growing up believing that happiness comes from the next purchase. Because advertisements are now everywhere — on our phones, in our games and even in the videos we watch — it has become almost impossible to escape this pressure or to switch it off. The sheer volume of advertising also blurs the line between what we actually need and what we have been persuaded to want. In conclusion, while advertising undeniably supports the economy and funds services we value, I believe its tendency to manufacture desire and fuel needless consumption makes its overall effect more negative than positive, at least in its current, unrelenting form. Tighter limits on how and where products can be advertised would help restore the balance.
⑦ 5.5 低分常见写法
Advertising has two sides. On the one hand, it is good for economy. On the other hand, it is bad because people buy too much. Every coin has two sides. So I think advertising is both good and bad, it depends on people.
⑧ 低分问题分析
  • 典型 '假讨论':两句话带过双方,且最后不给明确立场(TR 直接扣)
  • every coin has two sides 是明显模板腔
  • 'it depends on people' 是逃避表态
⑩ 学生练习题(原创,各写一篇)
  1. Some people think children benefit from attending nursery, while others believe they should stay at home with family. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
  2. Some believe technology makes people more sociable, while others think it makes them more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
  3. Some argue that governments should fund space exploration, while others think the money should go to problems on Earth. Discuss both and give your view.

训练单元 · 双问题题(Two-part question)

① 题型识别
题干问两件事,如 Why …? Is it positive or negative? / What are the causes? Is it good?——两个问题都要答。
⑤ 大纲模板
1引言:改写 + 说明将回答两个问题
2主体1:完整回答第一问(2 个原因,各展开)
3主体2:完整回答第二问(表态 + 理由 + 例)
4结论:两问的核心答案各一句
练习题目
More and more people are choosing to work from home rather than in an office. Why is this happening, and is it a positive or negative development?
⑥ Band 7 完整范文(约 262 词)
In recent years, a growing number of employees have swapped the office for their own homes. This essay will look at why this shift is happening and argue that, overall, it is a positive development. There are two main reasons behind the trend. The most obvious is technology: fast internet and video-calling tools now let people do almost any desk job from anywhere, so companies no longer need everyone in one building. The second is a change in what workers value. After experiencing flexible schedules, many people are reluctant to give up the time and freedom that home working offers, and employers have realised that allowing it helps them attract and keep good staff. In my view, this change is largely positive. Working from home removes long, stressful commutes, giving people more time for family, rest or exercise, which tends to make them both happier and more productive. It can also cut traffic and office costs. There are drawbacks, of course, such as isolation and blurred boundaries between work and life, but these can usually be managed with clear routines and the occasional day in the office. Employers who trust their staff to work independently often find that output stays high while sick days and resignations fall, which benefits the company as much as the individual. On balance, then, the move towards home working is driven by better technology and shifting priorities, and its benefits for wellbeing and flexibility make it a welcome development rather than a worrying one, as long as workers and employers agree on clear expectations from the start.
⑦ 5.5 低分常见写法
Many people work from home now. It is because of internet. Working from home is good because you can relax. Also you save time. So I think it is a positive thing. Nowadays more and more people do this.
⑩ 学生练习题(原创,各写一篇)
  1. More people are living alone than in the past. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development?
  2. In many countries, people are having fewer children. What are the reasons, and is this a good or bad thing?
  3. Increasing numbers of students study abroad. Why do they do this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

训练单元 · 问题解决题(Problem & Solution)

① 题型识别
题干问 What problems …? How can they be solved? / causes and solutions——原因/问题 + 对策各成段。
⑤ 大纲模板
1引言:改写 + 说明先谈问题再谈对策
2主体1:1–2 个问题/原因,说明影响
3主体2:对应对策,解释为什么有效
4结论:问题与方案各一句
练习题目
Many young people are leaving rural areas to live in big cities. What problems does this cause, and what can be done to address them?
⑥ Band 7 完整范文(约 256 词)
Across many countries, young people are steadily abandoning the countryside for life in large cities. This creates real difficulties on both ends, but there are practical ways to ease them. The migration causes problems in two directions. In rural areas, the loss of young workers leaves communities ageing and hollowed out: farms lose labour, schools and shops close for lack of customers, and elderly residents are left without support. Meanwhile, the cities that receive these young people become overcrowded, pushing up rents and straining transport, housing and public services that were never built for such numbers. To address this, governments should make rural areas genuinely worth staying in rather than simply telling people not to leave. Investing in rural broadband, clinics and decent roads would allow young people to build careers — including remote work — without moving away. Offering incentives such as tax breaks or start-up grants to businesses that set up outside the cities would also create local jobs. At the same time, cities need to expand affordable housing and public transport to cope with those who do arrive, so that growth does not simply turn into overcrowding and rising rents. None of these measures is quick or cheap, but together they treat both ends of the problem rather than just one. In conclusion, the drift from countryside to city drains rural communities and overwhelms urban ones, but targeted investment in rural opportunity, combined with better urban planning, could bring the two back into balance and slow a drift that helps almost no one.
⑦ 5.5 低分常见写法
Many young people go to cities. This is a problem because cities are crowded. The government should build more houses. Also people should stay in villages. Then the problem will be solved.
⑩ 学生练习题(原创,各写一篇)
  1. Traffic accidents are increasing in many cities. What are the causes, and what solutions can you suggest?
  2. Many people no longer read books for pleasure. What problems does this cause, and how can reading be encouraged?
  3. Household waste is increasing in many countries. What are the causes, and what can be done to reduce it?

训练单元 · 利弊判断题(Advantages/Disadvantages)

① 题型识别
题干出现 Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 或 discuss advantages and disadvantages。前者必须表态。
⑤ 大纲模板
1引言:改写 + 明确 advantages/disadvantages 谁更重
2主体1:先给对立面(让步),公正但简短
3主体2:给你认为更重的一方,展开更充分
4结论:重申权衡结果
练习题目
In some countries, people can now buy almost anything online, from food to furniture. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
⑥ Band 7 完整范文(约 251 词)
In a growing number of countries, almost every kind of product can now be bought online and delivered to the door. Although this raises some genuine concerns, I believe its advantages clearly outweigh the drawbacks. It is true that the shift to online shopping brings problems. Small local shops struggle to compete with large e-commerce platforms and many have closed, taking jobs and high-street life with them. Constant home delivery also generates packaging waste and heavy traffic from delivery vans. These are real costs that should not be ignored. Nevertheless, the benefits are greater and reach more people. Online shopping saves enormous amounts of time and effort: instead of travelling from store to store, people can compare prices and order in minutes, which is especially valuable for the elderly, the disabled or those in remote areas with few shops nearby. It usually offers lower prices and far wider choice, and it has allowed countless small producers to reach customers they could never have found locally. With sensible steps — such as greener packaging, delivery that combines orders, and tax support for local shops — many of these downsides can be reduced without giving up the convenience. The problem, in other words, lies less in online shopping itself than in how carelessly it is currently run. In conclusion, while online shopping does harm traditional retail and the environment, the convenience, choice and access it offers to so many people make its advantages, on balance, considerably more significant than the problems it creates.
⑦ 5.5 低分常见写法
Online shopping has advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is it is convenient. The disadvantage is shops close. In my opinion it has both advantages and disadvantages. It depends.
⑩ 学生练习题(原创,各写一篇)
  1. Working from home has become common. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
  2. Many tourists now visit remote and fragile environments. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
  3. In some countries young people are encouraged to take a gap year before university. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Task 1 图表实验室 · 12 例

6 大图型各 2 例,全部为"练习图表示例"(文字描述,无伪造图片)。每例含:核心特征 / Overview / 主体分组 / 完整范文 / 低分错误 / 可迁移表达。练法:先自己写,再对照范文,重点看"怎么选特征、怎么分组、怎么不堆数据"。
1 · 折线图 1
练习图表示例
某国 2000–2020 年三类饮品人均年消费量(升):瓶装水从 20 升持续升到 90 升;碳酸饮料从 100 升降到 60 升;茶从 55 升小幅波动到 50 升。
① 核心特征:瓶装水大幅上升并反超;碳酸饮料持续下降;茶基本平稳
② Overview:Overall, bottled water consumption rose dramatically and eventually overtook carbonated drinks, whose popularity steadily fell, while tea consumption stayed relatively stable throughout.
③ 主体分组:主体1 瓶装水与碳酸饮料的反向变化(含反超点);主体2 茶的平稳。
④ Band 7 范文:The line graph shows the average amount of three drinks consumed per person each year in one country between 2000 and 2020, measured in litres. Overall, bottled water consumption rose dramatically and eventually overtook carbonated drinks, whose popularity declined steadily, while tea remained relatively stable. In 2000, carbonated drinks were by far the most popular, at around 100 litres per person, compared with just 20 litres of bottled water. Over the next two decades, however, the two moved in opposite directions: bottled water climbed steadily to about 90 litres, while carbonated drinks fell to roughly 60 litres, meaning water had clearly overtaken them by the end of the period. Tea followed a very different pattern. Beginning at 55 litres, it fluctuated only slightly before settling at around 50 litres in 2020, staying well below the other two drinks for the entire period.
⑥ 可迁移:rose/climbed steadily · declined · overtook · fluctuated slightly · in the opposite direction
2 · 折线图 2
练习图表示例
1990–2020 某市三种通讯方式使用率(%):固定电话从 80% 降到 15%;手机从 5% 升到 95%;书信从 40% 降到 5%。
① 核心特征:手机爆发式上升;固话与书信大幅下降;手机反超固话的交叉点
② Overview:Overall, mobile phone use surged to become by far the most common form of communication, whereas both landlines and letters declined sharply over the thirty-year period.
④ Band 7 范文:The line graph illustrates changes in the use of three communication methods in one city from 1990 to 2020, shown as percentages. Overall, mobile phone use surged to become by far the most common method, while both landlines and letters fell sharply over the period. In 1990, landlines dominated, used by 80% of people, with letters at 40% and mobile phones almost non-existent at 5%. The following decades saw a dramatic reversal. Mobile phone use climbed rapidly, overtaking landlines around the middle of the period and reaching 95% by 2020. Landlines, meanwhile, collapsed to just 15%. Letter writing showed the same downward trend, declining steadily from 40% to a mere 5% as faster digital options took over.
⑥ 可迁移:surged · collapsed to · overtook … around the middle of the period · almost completely replaced
3 · 柱状图 1
练习图表示例
四个国家(A/B/C/D)2021 年每周人均运动时长(小时):A 3.0、B 6.5、C 4.2、D 7.8。
① 核心特征:D 最高、A 最低;相差超一倍;B、D 明显高于 A、C
② Overview:Overall, people in countries D and B exercised considerably more than those in A and C, with D recording more than twice the weekly exercise time of A.
④ Band 7 范文:The bar chart compares the average number of hours people in four countries spent exercising each week in 2021. Overall, residents of countries D and B were far more active than those in A and C, with the gap between the highest and lowest being more than twofold. Country D had the highest figure, at 7.8 hours per week, closely followed by B at 6.5 hours. In contrast, the remaining two countries reported much lower levels of exercise. Country C stood at 4.2 hours, while country A recorded the lowest at just 3.0 hours — less than half the figure for D.
⑥ 可迁移:far more … than · the highest figure · closely followed by · less than half · stood out as
4 · 柱状图 2
练习图表示例
某大学 2019 vs 2023 五个专业(商科/工程/艺术/医学/法律)招生人数变化,商科与工程明显增长,艺术下降,医学法律基本持平。
① 核心特征:商科工程增长最多;艺术下降;医学法律持平
② Overview:Overall, enrolment in business and engineering rose noticeably between 2019 and 2023, while the arts saw a decline and the other two subjects changed little.
④ Band 7 范文:The bar chart shows how student enrolment in five subjects at a university changed between 2019 and 2023. Overall, business and engineering attracted noticeably more students over the period, whereas the arts became less popular and medicine and law remained largely unchanged. The clearest growth was in business and engineering. Both started as mid-sized subjects but expanded substantially by 2023, suggesting rising demand for career-focused degrees. By contrast, the arts moved in the opposite direction, with enrolment falling visibly. Medicine and law stayed almost flat across the two years, indicating steady but not increasing interest.
⑥ 可迁移:rose noticeably · in the opposite direction · remained largely unchanged · steady but not increasing
5 · 表格 1
练习图表示例
四国 2020 年家庭月支出四类占比——食品(A35/B20/C28/D15)、住房(25/38/30/40)、娱乐(10/22/15/25)、其他(30/20/27/20)。
① 核心特征:A、C 食品占比高;B、D 住房娱乐占比高;随富裕食品占比下降
② Overview:Overall, food took up the largest share of spending in the less wealthy countries A and C, whereas households in B and D spent proportionally more on housing and entertainment.
④ Band 7 范文:The table compares how households in four countries divided their monthly spending across four categories in 2020, shown as percentages. Overall, food accounted for the biggest share in countries A and C, while B and D devoted proportionally more of their budgets to housing and entertainment — a familiar pattern in which food takes a smaller slice as wealth rises. Food represented 35% of spending in A and 28% in C, but only 20% and 15% in B and D respectively. Housing showed the reverse: it was the single largest cost in D and B, at 40% and 38%, compared with a quarter or less in A and C.
⑥ 可迁移:accounted for the biggest share · proportionally more · showed the reverse · a quarter or less
6 · 表格 2
练习图表示例
某公司 2018–2021 四年四个部门员工人数:销售逐年增、研发大增、客服基本不变、行政略降。
① 核心特征:研发增幅最大;销售稳步增;客服/行政基本平
② Overview:Overall, the workforce grew mainly through a sharp expansion in research and development, with sales also rising steadily, while customer service and administration changed little.
④ Band 7 范文:The table shows the number of employees in four departments of a company over four years, from 2018 to 2021. Overall, the company grew chiefly because of a rapid expansion in research and development, supported by steady growth in sales, whereas customer service and administration remained fairly constant. Research and development saw the most striking change, with staff numbers rising sharply year on year and roughly doubling across the period. Sales also expanded, though more gradually. By contrast, the customer service team barely changed, while administration slipped slightly.
⑥ 可迁移:grew chiefly because of · roughly doubling · a steady climb · barely changed · slipped slightly
7 · 饼图 1
练习图表示例
某国 2000 vs 2020 发电来源占比——煤从 60% 降到 25%;天然气从 20% 升到 35%;可再生从 10% 升到 35%;核能 10%→5%。
① 核心特征:煤大幅下降;可再生大增并追平天然气;整体转向清洁能源
② Overview:Overall, the country shifted away from coal towards cleaner sources between 2000 and 2020, as renewables and natural gas grew substantially while coal's share fell by more than half.
④ Band 7 范文:The two pie charts compare the sources of electricity generation in one country in 2000 and 2020. Overall, the country moved away from coal towards cleaner energy over the twenty years, with renewables and natural gas expanding while coal declined steeply. In 2000, coal was the dominant source, providing 60% of electricity, with natural gas and renewables playing minor roles at 20% and 10%. By 2020, coal's share had fallen by more than half to just 25%, and nuclear power had also shrunk from 10% to 5%. In their place, renewables saw the largest rise, climbing from 10% to 35%, level with natural gas, which itself grew from 20% to 35%.
⑥ 可迁移:shifted away from … towards · fell by more than half · in their place · level with · supplied the majority
8 · 饼图 2
练习图表示例
某大学生每月开支分布——住房 40%、餐饮 25%、交通 12%、娱乐 13%、其他 10%。
① 核心特征:住房占最大;住房+餐饮占近三分之二;交通/娱乐/其他较小且接近
② Overview:Overall, housing was by far the biggest expense, and together with food it made up nearly two-thirds of a student's monthly spending, while the remaining categories were much smaller and fairly similar.
④ Band 7 范文:The pie chart illustrates how an average university student divided their monthly spending across five categories. Overall, housing dominated the budget and, together with food, accounted for close to two-thirds of all spending, whereas the other three categories each took a much smaller and broadly similar share. Housing was clearly the largest single cost, taking up 40% of the total — twice as much as any other category. Food came second at 25%, so these two essentials alone consumed 65% of a student's money. Entertainment and transport were close, at 13% and 12% respectively, while other items made up the final 10%.
⑥ 可迁移:dominated the budget · accounted for close to two-thirds · twice as much as · spread fairly evenly
9 · 地图 1
练习图表示例
某海滨小镇 1995 与 2020:镇中心农田变住宅区;海边建了码头和餐厅;老工厂拆除改公园;镇北修了环路。
① 核心特征:农田/工厂消失;住宅、码头餐厅、公园出现;整体转向居住与旅游
② Overview:Overall, the town changed from a farming settlement into a more residential and tourist-oriented one, as farmland and an old factory made way for housing, leisure facilities and green space.
④ Band 7 范文:The two maps show how a small seaside town developed between 1995 and 2020. Overall, the town was transformed from a largely agricultural settlement into a more residential and tourist-focused one. The most noticeable change occurred in the town centre, where the farmland that once dominated the area was replaced by a large residential district. Along the seafront, a marina was constructed and a row of restaurants was built beside it. Further changes took place to the north and on the site of the old factory: the factory was demolished and the land was converted into a public park, while a ring road was built around the northern edge of the town to divert traffic away from the centre.
⑥ 可迁移:was transformed into · gave way to · was replaced by · was converted into · to the north of
10 · 地图 2
练习图表示例
一所学校 2005 与 2023:一栋教学楼扩建;操场缩小、一角建了停车场;新增一座图书馆;入口从南移到东。
① 核心特征:新增图书馆、停车场;操场缩小;入口迁移
② Overview:Overall, the school was expanded and modernised between 2005 and 2023, gaining new facilities such as a library and a car park, though this came at the cost of some of its open playing space.
④ Band 7 范文:The two maps compare the layout of a school in 2005 and 2023. Overall, the school was expanded and modernised over the period, gaining several new facilities, although some of its open space was lost as a result. The original teaching block was extended to provide more classrooms, and a new library was built in the eastern part of the site. A car park was also added in one corner of the grounds. These improvements, however, reduced the playing field, which was noticeably smaller by 2023. In addition, the main entrance was relocated from the south side to the east.
⑥ 可迁移:was expanded and modernised · gaining · at the cost of · was relocated from … to
11 · 流程图 1
练习图表示例
玻璃瓶回收再利用:收集→清洗→按颜色分拣→粉碎→高温熔化→塑形成新瓶→送回商店。共 7 步,循环。
① 核心特征:7 个步骤、线性到循环;起点收集、终点回到商店
② Overview:Overall, the process of recycling glass bottles consists of seven main stages, beginning with collection and ending with the return of new bottles to shops, forming a continuous cycle.
④ Band 7 范文:The flow chart illustrates how glass bottles are recycled and reused. Overall, the process is made up of seven main stages, starting with the collection of used bottles and finishing with new bottles being returned to shops, so that the whole cycle can begin again. At the first stage, used glass bottles are collected from homes and businesses. They are then washed thoroughly and sorted according to their colour. Once sorted, the bottles are crushed into small pieces. In the second half of the process, the crushed glass is melted at a very high temperature until it becomes liquid. This molten glass is then shaped into new bottles using moulds. Finally, the finished bottles are transported back to shops, completing the cycle.
⑥ 可迁移:consists of … stages · are collected/washed/sorted · is then melted · completing the cycle(现在被动 + 时序词)
12 · 流程图 2
练习图表示例
咖啡豆从种植到成品:种植→采摘→晾晒→去壳→烘焙→研磨→包装。共 7 步,线性。
① 核心特征:7 步线性、无循环;从农业到工业加工两阶段
② Overview:Overall, producing coffee involves seven linear stages, moving from growing and harvesting the beans through to roasting, grinding and finally packaging the finished product.
④ Band 7 范文:The diagram shows the stages involved in producing coffee, from growing the beans to packaging the final product. Overall, the process is linear and can be divided into an agricultural phase and a processing phase, involving seven main steps in total. In the first phase, coffee is grown on plantations and the ripe beans are picked by hand. The beans are then dried in the sun before their outer shells are removed. In the second phase, the beans are roasted at a high temperature, which gives them their characteristic colour and flavour. After roasting, they are ground into powder and finally packaged so that the coffee is ready to be sold.
⑥ 可迁移:can be divided into … phase · are picked/dried/roasted/ground · before · finally packaged

范文精讲 · Task 2 观点题

题目
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
审题
  • 关键词:unpaid(无偿)、compulsory(强制)、high school——别漏掉"强制"这层
  • 任务:表明同意程度。安全立场="部分同意"(大方向支持,但不该一刀切强制)
关键词伙
community service · a sense of civic responsibility · practical skills · impose a burden on · at the expense of academic study · strike a balance
完整范文(约 260 词,band 7 左右)
Many schools are now considering whether teenagers should be required to do unpaid work for their communities before they graduate. I broadly support this idea, though I do not think it should be enforced in a rigid, one-size-fits-all way.

The main benefit is that helping others teaches young people things a classroom cannot. When a student spends a weekend helping at a care home or cleaning up a local park, they see real problems and learn how their effort actually affects people around them. This tends to build a sense of responsibility and confidence, and it also gives them practical experience — teamwork, communication, showing up on time — that employers later value far more than a perfect exam score.

That said, making it strictly compulsory can backfire. Teenagers in their final years already face heavy academic pressure, and forcing a fixed number of hours on everyone may simply add stress or turn a meaningful activity into a box-ticking exercise. Some students also have part-time jobs or family duties that already teach similar lessons. A wiser approach would be to set a light requirement and let students choose how and when they contribute, so the experience stays genuine rather than resented.

In short, I agree that community service belongs in school life because of what it teaches beyond textbooks, but its value depends on giving students some flexibility instead of treating it as one more rule to obey.
为什么能到 7 分:立场清晰且贯穿全文;每个观点都"展开+具体场景"(care home / park);用了 backfire、box-ticking exercise 等地道搭配;让步段让论证更成熟;句式简繁交替、几乎无错。
低分学生常见错误:① 只写"community service is good because it is helpful"不展开;② 忽略"compulsory"只谈"是否该做服务"=偏题;③ 通篇 firstly/secondly/in conclusion;④ 编"85% of students"这种假数据。

范文精讲 · Task 2 双边讨论

题目
Some people think children should be taught to compete, while others believe they should be taught to cooperate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
审题
  • 两种教育取向:竞争 vs 合作。题目要 "your opinion",必须明确站队
  • 安全立场:两者都需要,但成长阶段更该以合作为底、竞争为辅
完整范文(约 250 词,band 7 左右)
People disagree about whether childhood should be built around competition or cooperation. Both clearly matter, but in my view cooperation should be the foundation, with healthy competition playing a supporting role.

Those who favour competition have a fair point. A bit of rivalry can push children to try harder and to keep going after they lose, which builds resilience they will need as adults. A child who takes part in a sports match, for instance, quickly learns that losing is not the end of the world and that improvement comes from effort. Without any competition at all, some children may struggle to stay motivated.

However, I find the case for cooperation more convincing, because most of adult life depends on working well with others rather than beating them. When children complete a group project or organise an event together, they learn to listen, share credit and solve disagreements — skills that shape both careers and relationships. Constant competition, by contrast, can leave children anxious and reluctant to help classmates in case it costs them their own ranking.

Overall, I believe children benefit from both, but schools and parents should lead with cooperation and use competition carefully, as a way to motivate rather than to divide. A child who can work with others and also handle losing is far better prepared for the real world than one who has only learned to win.
为什么能到 7 分:两方各给了公正篇幅(避免"假讨论");立场在引言即明确并在结论呼应;beating them / share credit / handle losing 自然地道。
低分学生常见错误:① 只写两方观点却不给自己立场(TR 直接扣);② 两段严重失衡(一段150词一段60词);③ "every coin has two sides"这类套话开头。

范文精讲 · Task 2 问题解决

题目
In many large cities, traffic congestion is becoming increasingly serious. What are the main causes, and what measures could be taken to address this problem?
审题
  • 双任务:原因 + 对策,两段各答一个,篇幅均衡
  • 对策要"具体可行 + 说明为什么有效",别只列清单
完整范文(约 250 词,band 7 左右)
Traffic jams have become a daily frustration in many major cities. This essay will first look at why congestion keeps worsening and then suggest some practical ways to ease it.

There are two main causes. The most obvious one is the sharp rise in private car ownership: as incomes grow, more families buy cars and use them even for short trips, which quickly overwhelms roads that were never designed for such volume. A second cause is that public transport in many cities is simply not good enough — services are slow, crowded or unreliable, so people who could take a bus or train choose to drive instead.

Fortunately, several measures could make a real difference. One effective option is congestion charging, where drivers pay a fee to enter the busiest areas during peak hours. Cities such as London have shown that this discourages unnecessary trips and, just as importantly, raises money that can be reinvested in transport. Alongside this, governments should make public transport genuinely attractive — more frequent services, dedicated bus lanes and lower fares — so that leaving the car at home feels like the easier choice rather than a sacrifice.

In conclusion, urban congestion is driven mainly by growing car use and weak public transport, but a combination of pricing drivers off the road and giving them a better alternative could bring traffic back under control.
为什么能到 7 分:原因/对策各成段且均衡;对策"拥堵费"给了机制 + 真实城市参照(London,非伪造数据);overwhelms / reinvested / dedicated bus lanes 用词准确。
低分学生常见错误:① 对策写成清单"build more roads, use public transport, drive less"无展开;② 只答原因漏对策;③ 编造精确数据充当论据。

范文精讲 · Task 1 折线/趋势图

练习图表示例(文字描述,非真实图片)
一张折线图显示某国 2005–2020 年三种通勤方式的使用比例:开私家车从 45% 升到 60%;公共交通从 40% 降到 28%;骑行从 15% 缓慢升到 12%(先降后回升)。
审题 + 关键词
时间类折线=描述趋势。时态用一般过去。关键词伙:rose steadily / declined / remained relatively stable / overtook / the gap widened
Overview(最关键)
只说大方向、不堆数字:私家车全程上升并成为主流,公共交通持续下滑,骑行占比最小且变化不大。
完整范文(约 170 词,band 7 左右)
The line graph shows how people in one country travelled to work between 2005 and 2020, measured as a percentage using three modes of transport.

Overall, it is clear that private cars became the dominant means of commuting over the period, while the use of public transport fell steadily. Cycling remained the least popular option throughout.

In 2005, public transport and private cars were used by similar shares of commuters, at around 40% and 45% respectively. From that point, car use rose steadily, reaching 60% by 2020. Public transport moved in the opposite direction, declining to just 28% by the end of the period, so the gap between the two widened considerably.

Cycling followed a different pattern. Having started at 15%, it dipped slightly in the middle years before recovering to around 12% by 2020. Despite this small recovery, it stayed well below the other two modes for the entire period.
为什么能到 7 分:Overview 单独成段且不含数字;主体按"相似起点→反向变化"和"骑行另类"分组;overtook 换成 the gap widened、dipped、recovering 等趋势词丰富。
低分学生常见错误:① 漏 Overview(几乎锁死 5–6);② 逐年读数据像流水账;③ 时态错用现在时;④ increase 反复出现不换词。

范文精讲 · Task 1 表格/饼图

练习图表示例(文字描述,非真实图片)
一张表格显示 2019 年四个国家家庭平均月支出在四类上的占比:食品(A 35% / B 20% / C 28% / D 15%)、住房(25/38/30/40)、娱乐(10/22/15/25)、其他(30/20/27/20)。
审题 + 关键词
无时间=对比,时态用一般现在。关键词伙:accounted for / the largest proportion / by contrast / roughly a third / the figure for
Overview
较富裕国家(B、D)在住房和娱乐上花得多、食品占比低;较不富裕国家(A、C)食品占比最高——恩格尔式对比。
完整范文(约 165 词,band 7 左右)
The table compares how households in four countries divided their monthly spending across four categories in 2019, shown as percentages.

Overall, food took up the largest share of spending in countries A and C, whereas households in B and D spent proportionally more on housing and entertainment. This suggests a familiar pattern in which food accounts for a smaller slice of the budget as overall wealth rises.

Looking at the details, food represented 35% of spending in country A and 28% in C, but only 20% and 15% in B and D respectively. Housing showed the reverse: it was the biggest single cost in D and B, at 40% and 38%, compared with a quarter or less in A and C.

Entertainment followed a similar split, ranging from a quarter of the budget in D down to just 10% in A, while spending on other items was fairly close across all four countries, at between 20% and 30%.
为什么能到 7 分:抓"食品 vs 住房呈相反格局"这条主线做 Overview,而非逐格读;accounted for / the reverse / a quarter or less 表达灵活;用 whereas、compared with 做对比衔接。
低分学生常见错误:① 把 16 个数字全读一遍无重点;② 无 Overview;③ 全篇 "the number of ... is ..." 句式单一。

范文精讲 · Task 1 地图/流程

练习图表示例(文字描述,非真实图片)
两幅地图显示某沿海小镇 19902020 的变化:镇中心的农田变成了住宅区;海边新建了码头和一排餐厅;老工厂被拆除、原址改为公园;一条新环路绕过镇北。
审题 + 关键词
地图=描述变化,多用被动 + 方位。关键词伙:was replaced by / were demolished / a new … was constructed / to the north of / converted into
Overview
整体上小镇从农业/工业为主转变为居住与旅游导向:农田和工厂消失,住宅、码头餐厅和公园出现。
完整范文(约 170 词,band 7 左右)
The two maps illustrate how a small coastal town changed between 1990 and 2020.

Overall, the town shifted from a farming and industrial settlement towards a more residential and tourist-oriented one, as open farmland and the old factory made way for housing, leisure facilities and green space.

The most striking change took place in the town centre, where the farmland that once dominated the area was replaced by a large residential district. Along the coast, a new marina was constructed and a row of restaurants was built beside it, turning the seafront into an area for visitors.

Further changes occurred to the north and on the site of the old factory. The factory itself was demolished and the land was converted into a public park, while a new ring road was built around the northern edge of the town, allowing traffic to bypass the centre. As a result, the town in 2020 looks noticeably greener and more modern than three decades earlier.
为什么能到 7 分:Overview 抓"农业工业→居住旅游"的整体转变;被动语态(was replaced / was demolished / was converted)贯穿;方位词组织清晰。
低分学生常见错误:① 只说"there is a park, there is a road"不写"变化";② 不用被动、方位混乱;③ 无整体 Overview。
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